If you actually watch the entire thing its a lot better than the beggining
For VijchtiDoodah he says in the comments "It's loosely based on a story I read, though i've changed things to keep it more visually stimulating." So its not supposed to be like that short story.
Overall i thought the movie was very funny espesially the sound effects.
That was very funny with good animation. You should make this a series!
What was this
I Have no idea what you were saying and next time use your own voices
i write what the sound was making .... !@#$ you
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